More Often


Dear friends!

- If you want your girlfriend to love you more, you should pay more attention to her, and kiss her more often.
- Is this sentence natural?

Thanks a lot!

  • Trisia

    Senior Member
    To be honest, I'm not very happy with the first part. It makes me feel like he can do certain things in order to trigger certain reactions/responses from the girl. That's mean.

    I'd say: "If you want your girlfriend to feel happy/pleased..."
    "If you want to show your girlfriend how much you love her..."


    Senior Member
    AE, Español
    Thank you, konungursvia. You are right insofar as I should have written "could be eliminated" rather than "should be eliminated."
    namian, the preferred redaction of the sentence would be without a comma. You may leave the comma there, and I might even go so far as to say that it is a stylistic improvement.
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