My Muse betrays me at the moment.

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arueng

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CHINESE
My Muse betrays me at the moment.



Hi,
I wrote the above, but I feel there is something odd about it. So I wonder if it's better to rewrite it this way: My Muse is betraying me at the moment.
YOur opinions will be warmly appreciated. Thanks.
 
  • owlman5

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    English-US
    I don't think there is anything odd about your first version. I prefer it to "My Muse is betraying me at the moment."
     
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