My new generation would be better.

[straightfire]

Hi everyone!
I am really glad to have joined this prestigious forum which helps a lot to clear doubts.
I'd appreciate your help in this sentence.
My try: My new generation would better than the old generation if we were a little bit responsible.
Are there any mistakes ?
Thanks in advance.

 

[colombo-aussie]

Hi everyone!
I am really glad to have joined this prestigious forum which helps a lot to clear doubts.
I'd appreciate your help in this sentence.
My try: My new generation would be better than the old generation if we were a little bit responsible.
Are there any mistakes ?
Thanks in advance.

 

[turi]

Hi everyone!
I am really glad to have joined this prestigious forum which helps a lot to clear doubts.
I'd appreciate your help in this sentence.
My try: My new(?) generation would be better than the old one if we were (to be) a little bit more responsible.
Are there any mistakes ?
Thanks in advance.

Espera más sugerencias.

Saludos, t.

 

[onbalance]

Hi everyone!
I am really glad to have joined this prestigious forum which helps a lot to clear doubts.
I'd appreciate your help in this sentence.
My try: My new generation would better than the old generation if we were a little bit responsible.
Are there any mistakes ?
Thanks in advance.

No podemos proporcionarte una corrección cuidada fuera del contexto. ¿Podrías proveernos la frase original en español y el contexto en el que la frase se usa.