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Audrey678

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French
Hi everyone,

Can you help me and tell me if the following sentence sounds good in inglish ? It's the introduction of my cover letter.

"Inspired by innovative and creative solutions, my will is to think outside of the box and work on original projects."

As I'm working in marketing, I really need something catchy.
 
  • velisarius

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    British English (Sussex)
    We don't do proofreading of whole sentences, but "my will" is not appropriate here. "Thinking outside of the box' is rather a cliche, but we can say "I'm determined to think outside of the box." Please remember, it's "English".
     

    Audrey678

    Member
    French
    I'm sorry for the inglish instead of english, I made a typo.

    Is the begining of the sentence ok ? Thinking outside of the box is a cliche but as my english is not good, I need this cliche to express what I want to say.

    Does this work ?

    "Inspired by innovative and creative solutions, I'm determined to think outside of the box and work on original projects".
     
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