nel rispetto della salute del cliente

[Klod86]

Non so se va bene questa frase, qualcuno potrebbe dargli un'occhiata:
Evento organizzato per celebrare i 15 anni di xxx, azienda leader mondiale per la cura dei capelli nel rispetto della salute del cliente e dei professionisti del settore
Event arranged to celebrate 15 years of xxx, a world leader company in hair care which aim is to respect the customers health and professionals of this field.
Mi suona male e quel nel rispetto di mi sta facendo impazzire
Grazie

 

[AlabamaBoy]

An event organized to celebrate XXX's 15 years as a world leading supplier of hair-care products promoting healthy (client) hair and serving hair-care professionals worldwide.

 

[rrose17]

An event organized to celebrate XXX's 15 years as a world leading supplier of hair-care products promoting healthy (client) hair and serving hair-care professionals worldwide.

Well done AB! Except I think you can just leave out "worldwide" since you used the word "world" already, no?

 

[AlabamaBoy]

Yes, rrose, I know, but the sentence loses its cadence without "worldwide."I know it doesn't add any information, but the sentence feels slightly flat without it. I am open for suggestions.

 

[rrose17]

It's fine, and I'm just being picky, but you could also drop the first world and leave the worldwide at the end for overall emphasis.
An event celebrating XXX's 15 years as a leading supplier of hair-care products promoting healthy hair and serving hair-care professionals worldwide.

 

[AlabamaBoy]

An event celebrating XXX's 15 years as a leading supplier of hair-care products promoting healthy hair and serving hair-care professionals worldwide.

I like it!

 

[Klod86]

siete dei geni!