I agree with others that the meaning of the sentence is unclear.
You might say: "This essay criticizes the fact that individuals are unable to choose whether they will be born into the world."
How exactly your criticism will play out, I have no idea, as this strikes me as a natural phenomenon. Whom/what is there to criticize? An individual who does not yet exist cannot have a choice, and to choose not to be born prior to being born is paradoxical, because one must exist to do that. These matters go beyond the scope of this forum, however.