Not all memories become whispers on the winds.

[地獄の森_jigoku_no_mori]

Not all memories become whispers on the winds.

Is this right?:
記憶ないすべてが風のささやきになります。

 

[Flaminius]

I might be overlooking something very obvious but I don't think Japanese can construct partial negation in the same way as English does.

全ての記憶が風のささやきになるわけではない。
subete-no kioku-ga kaze-no sasayaki-ni naru wake dewanai.
That all memories become whispers in the wind is not reasonable.

I translated "wake dewanai" as "be not reasonable" just to make sense out of a sloppy translation. Semantically, it creates a negated proposition; NOT [A is B].

 

[地獄の森_jigoku_no_mori]

So are you saying what I asked for is not possible in Japanese? Or that the words used in it are wrong? Because if it's just my words, then go ahead and change them.

 

[Flaminius]

So are you saying what I asked for is not possible in Japanese?

I have given a translation, a transcription and a gross. I was just saying the translation cannot be word-for-word. This was a comment for your attempt, 「記憶ないすべて」, which I thought to be a literal translation of "not all memories."