Last week, I sent one of my articles to a former IELTS examiner on iTalki, and I wrote my first introduction paragraph like:
"Some people believe that leaving their home countries will offer them better work and living opportunities, while others contend that it is better to stay in home countries."
The former examiner says that this paragraph is too short to be a paragraph because it is only one sentence.
Is it true? Must a paragraph have at least two sentences?
"Some people believe that leaving their home countries will offer them better work and living opportunities, while others contend that it is better to stay in home countries."
The former examiner says that this paragraph is too short to be a paragraph because it is only one sentence.
Is it true? Must a paragraph have at least two sentences?