or other property starring {insert name here}

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Kay_5

Senior Member
italiano
Hello.
Is the sentence below natural? If no, can you suggest another word instead of "starring"?
Thanks.

I assign all rights of my story to you for development into a movie or other property starring {insert name here}
 
  • owlman5

    Senior Member
    English-US
    I understand "starring", Kay, but this looks like language for some sort of contract or release form. I'm not sure that "starring" is valid in legal language.

    If you intend to use this in the real world, you should really get an attorney's opinion about the language. Legal language is notoriously tricky, and only attorneys are qualified to tell you whether your document will be acceptable in court.
     
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