Hi friends, please help me with the following question.
My classmate wrote a sentence:The Lord Jesus is our support for eternity, He is our strong tower for all time, our refuge.
I change it to be:The Lord Jesus is our support for eternity, He is our strong tower, our refuge for all time.
Q: Do you think which version is better or more reasonable?
Thank you beforehand.
My classmate wrote a sentence:The Lord Jesus is our support for eternity, He is our strong tower for all time, our refuge.
I change it to be:The Lord Jesus is our support for eternity, He is our strong tower, our refuge for all time.
Q: Do you think which version is better or more reasonable?
Thank you beforehand.