penetrate its horns into

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keramus

Senior Member
Persian
Hello everybody

I want to say:
A deer killed a bear by penetrating its horns into the beard's stomach.

Is this sentence correct and natural?

Thanks.
 
  • owlman5

    Senior Member
    English-US
    Hi, keramus. I'm sorry, but "penetrating its horns" doesn't sound natural to me. I'd use a different verb to express the idea. You might consider "stab", "poke" or "push" as replacements for "penetrate."
     
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