Plot is gathering pace

Discussion in 'English Only' started by Hotmale, May 21, 2011.

  1. Hotmale

    Hotmale Senior Member

    Polish
    Hello :)

    I'm writing a film review and I'm wondering whether this sentence is correct and souds common: "This is when the plot (action?) is gathering pace".
    I'm refering to a rather dull beginining, but soon things change and the viewer wants to watch for more.

    Thank you
     
  2. Inglip Senior Member

    Dubai, UAE
    English - UK
    It is correct.

    However, I would say - This is when the plot begins to pick up pace, this is when the plot starts to gather speed.
     
  3. Hotmale

    Hotmale Senior Member

    Polish
    I see.
    Thank you for the answer :)
     

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