Position of comma

So-Nature

Senior Member
Igbo
Hello there,

Below is an extract from an argument in support of death sentence. Is the sentence correct?

For most people, it is better to work some of the hardest jobs in order to earn a living than get involved in crimes which may ultimately lead to death sentence.

Thank you
 
  • Barque

    Senior Member
    Tamil
    We aren't allowed to proof-read, So-Nature. Do you have a question on a specific word or phrase in that sentence?
     

    So-Nature

    Senior Member
    Igbo
    We aren't allowed to proof-read, So-Nature. Do you have a question on a specific word or phrase in that sentence?
    Ok. I am worried about the punctuation. Should I place commas before and after "ultimately" to give it a better meaning? Like this:

    For most people, it is better to work some of the hardest jobs in order to earn a living than get involved in crimes which may, ultimately, lead to death sentence.

    Thank you
     
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