pressing password to the door?

[bosun]

I am not sure if the following expression (especially the red parts) is right. Let me have your comment. ( and if possible, please mark all the mistakes) Thanks in advance.

After pressing round numbered buttons to the door for the password, I enter my home.

Home is my favorite place because it is the most comfortable place in the whole world where my family is waiting for me.

 

[la reine victoria]

I am not sure if the following expression (especially the red parts) is right. Let me have your comment. ( and if possible, please mark all the mistakes) Thanks in advance.

After pressing round numbered buttons to the door for the password, I enter my home. Please see below.

Home is my favorite place because it is the most comfortable place in the whole world wheremy family is waiting for me.

After pressing the entry-code buttons, the door opens and I go into my home.

LRV