pressing password to the door?

bosun

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I am not sure if the following expression (especially the red parts) is right. Let me have your comment. ( and if possible, please mark all the mistakes) Thanks in advance.

After pressing round numbered buttons to the door for the password, I enter my home.

Home is my favorite place because it is the most comfortable place in the whole world where my family is waiting for me.
 
  • I am not sure if the following expression (especially the red parts) is right. Let me have your comment. ( and if possible, please mark all the mistakes) Thanks in advance.

    After pressing round numbered buttons to the door for the password, I enter my home. Please see below.

    Home is my favorite place because it is the most comfortable place in the whole world wheremy family is waiting for me.:tick:
    After pressing the entry-code buttons, the door opens and I go into my home.

    LRV
     
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