Hi guys:
Could you please tell me Is this sentence "The picture shows us a procedure using batteries and steel wool making fire" correct?
Should I add an "of" after"procedure"? Is there any differences between these two expressions?
Should I ues "to make" instead of "making" when I describe a procedure?
Thank you for your help in advance! Any suggestions would be appreciated.
Could you please tell me Is this sentence "The picture shows us a procedure using batteries and steel wool making fire" correct?
Should I add an "of" after"procedure"? Is there any differences between these two expressions?
Should I ues "to make" instead of "making" when I describe a procedure?
Thank you for your help in advance! Any suggestions would be appreciated.