Question for a work of fiction

mokas

New Member
Spanish
This is for a work of fiction I'm currently writing.

Money laundering is, therefore, synonymous with Walter's family, which is the essence of all the work we do here.

Do you find any faults here?

Thank you so much.
 
  • heypresto

    Senior Member
    English - England
    We can't proofread entire sentences here, but will answer specific questions about specific words or phrases in sentences provided with some context.

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    mokas

    New Member
    Spanish
    We can't proofread entire sentences here, but will answer specific questions about specific words or phrases in sentences provided with some context.

    Do you have a specific question?
    Sorry. Yes, I do have a specific question:

    Money laundering is, therefore, synonymous with Walter's family, which is the essence of all the work we do here.

    Is the use of the word therefore here, between commas, correct?
     
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