Say goodbye to indecision

[Shoppergirl]

Hey everyone,
Ok so Im slowly translating this song "Into Me" from the show Zumanity. I'm not going to put the full song up but if someone could take a look at the first verse and give me some feedback on the translation.

Ive never actually used this forum before so im not sure if this is the right place to go -

My translation the verse is:
Salutate il indecisione
dietro le sue inibizioni
sfrenato prigioni morali
abbracciamo
una visione concupiscente

the original is something like:

Say goodbye to indecision
Leave behind your inhibitions
Unrestrained by moral prisons
We embrace a lustful vision

Thanks so much!

 

[effeundici]

Hey everyone,
Ok so Im slowly translating this song "Into Me" from the show Zumanity. I'm not going to put the full song up but if someone could take a look at the first verse and give me some feedback on the translation.

Ive never actually used this forum before so im not sure if this is the right place to go -

My translation the verse is:
Salutate (it means both hi and goodbye) il indecisione
dietro (means after) le sue (means his/her) inibizioni
sfrenato (it's an adjective) prigioni morali
abbracciamo
una visione concupiscente

the original is something like:

Say goodbye to indecision
Leave behind your inhibitions
Unrestrained by moral prisons
We embrace a lustful vision

Thanks so much!

Dite addio all'indecisione
Lasciatevi alle spalle le inibizioni
Liberati dalle prigioni morali
abbracciamo una visione di lussuria