seguire una conferenza in streaming

SpringSun

Member
Italian
Buongiorno a tutti,
devo esprimere il concetto "seguire una conferenza in streaming".
La frase è:





Dear all,

hereby we invite you to follow together with us the Webinar “XXXX”, that will be presented in streaming on the XX December 2010 in XXX.

E' corretto?
Grazie!
SpringSun
 
  • rrose17

    Senior Member
    Canada, English
    You should give us the whole sentence in Italian. I don't know how formal you want this to be, but I would probably avoid the word "hereby". In the meantime I think something like
    Hello everyone
    Please join us for the XXX Webinar that will be available for streaming on ...
     

    SpringSun

    Member
    Italian
    thank's a lot to everybody,
    I'll go for the sentence
    Hello everyone

    Please join us for the XXX Webinar that will be available for streaming on ...
    It's much more clear and straightforward
    SpringSun
     
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