Sentence combined

kenny4528

Senior Member
Mandarin, Taiwan
Hi, dear all

The group works by setting up Reader's Circles. A circle is given books. Members can read and discuss them.

These sentences are excerpted from an essay ''Make a difference''. I am trying to combine them to make it simpler in construction:

The group works by setting up Reader's Circles, which are given books for members to read and discuss.

Does my version look fine? Or you could come up with a better wording in your way, I will be glad to see it.
 
  • dn88

    Senior Member
    Polish
    My attempt:

    The group works by setting up Reader's Circles whose members can read and discuss books they are (previously) given.


    Cheers :D
     
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