She showed an improvement in her grades.

[Tikki$]

i want to know if this is the rigth way to write the sentence..!!!

"She showed an improvement in her grades, they went up instead of going down."

Help me please!

 

[stranger in your midst]

Replace the comma with a fullstop or colon/semicolon and you've got it !

 

[DCPaco]

Do you have the sentence in Spanish?

I agree with Stranger IYM. These are two related insubordinate clauses so you can use a semicolon to separate them and keep them somewhat attached.

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[Pablo de los EU]

i want to know if this is the rigth way to write the sentence..!!!

"She showed an improvement in her grades; they went up instead of going down."

Help me please!

You did just fine. I just changed the comma to a semicolon.

 

[Tikki$]

Ah ok thanks for the help!!