so, therefor, or semicolon

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( original sentence) Kim used a dandruff shampoo. She still had dandruff. She decided to see a dermatologist.

1. Kim used a dandruff shampoo, but she still had dandruff, so she decided to see a dermatologist.

2. " " ;therefore, she decided to see a dermatologist.

3. " " dandruff. Therefore( or As a result), she decided to see a dermatologist.
 
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