...sound clip used in which...

Rowan123

Member
Dutch
Hi,

Is the following sentence grammatically correct?

'This mood is mainly created by the voiceover for which a sound clip is used in which a man reads article 24 of the Geneva Convention with a very serious tone.'

'... sound clip used in which...' sounds a bit strange to me, because 'in which' refers to 'sound clip', not to the word 'used' which is followed by 'in which'
 
  • PaulQ

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    UK
    English - England
    'This mood is mainly created by the voiceover - a sound clip - in which a man reads article 24 of the Geneva Convention in a very serious tone.'
     
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