spirit bruise

fede135

Senior Member
Argentina/Spain Spanish
Hi mates!!!

I have some doubts with regard to "So many burdens your spirit bruise" it's part of a poem indeed:

(...) O woman African of many hues
So many burdens your spirit bruise
This flight delayed (...)

Spirit could be "espiritu" as well as "alma" but "bruise"? heridas? (even though most of the time is "cardenal" or "moratón" or "moretón"

This is my try: "demasiado deben soportar las heridas de tu alma"

Makes any sense?

Thanks in advance for your kindly help.

Fede
 
  • fede135

    Senior Member
    Argentina/Spain Spanish
    Hi Wandering JJ

    You are right! word order when it comes to poetry.

    Thanks a TON for your help and advice!!

    Fede
     

    fede135

    Senior Member
    Argentina/Spain Spanish
    I totally agree with you. Interesting as most of their literature.

    Thanks for your feedback!!!

    Fede
     
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