stood on his tummy staring at him

  • Chasint

    Senior Member
    English - England
    Because you used "staring" you should also use "pecking".

    "A sparrow stood on his tummy staring at him and pecking at his hand."

    If it only pecked once, then you could say:

    "A sparrow stood on his tummy staring at him. It pecked at his hand."
     

    Kimaunz

    Senior Member
    Korean - South Korea
    Okay. Thanks. Then "A sparrow stood on his tummy and pecked his hand." would be okay too.

    How does the following sentence sound?:
    A sparrow lay on his tummy and pecked his hand.
     
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