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Ahmed Ala'a Eldeen

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(URGENT!!)Can any one please correct my story please....
On a bright cold day in April , lived Sam and John in a nice and big villa in New York, USA. On Thursday, they decided to visit their Aunt Samira, and buy her some chocolates from the bakery shop , nearby . As soon as they reached , their aunt hugged them , as if they were her sons. Their eyes teared seeing her after five years. The reason is that, she was living in Syria , which is unsafe for them to go , but their aunt now lives in New York, the place where her nephews live . They all began talking about their family who is left their in Syria . However, probably after two months , they'll also travel for New York to live there . Sam and John loved .hearing that. They are very excited to see their relatives
 
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