Submission had been to the college and the submitted application was denied due to ......(Reasons)

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Fk313

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Hindi and Urdu
I had made a submission to a college some days ago and it was not accepted due to some documentation issues.
So I am writing a letter to my consultancy and I would like to understand please if the below statement is grammatically correct.

Submission had been made to the college and the submitted application was denied due to ......(Reasons)

Thank you in advance.
 
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  • Florentia52

    Modwoman in the attic
    English - United States
    Can you tell us which word or phrase in your sentence most troubles you, Fk313? We can't proofread the entire sentence.
     

    Fk313

    Senior Member
    Hindi and Urdu
    Can you tell us which word or phrase in your sentence most troubles you, Fk313? We can't proofread the entire sentence.
    The phrase troubling me is "Submission had been made to the college and the submitted application was denied" is this grammatically correct.

    Please help. Thank you in advacne
     
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