Surprise A Great Deal

[namlan]

A: Tomorrow I am going out for coffee with Bill Clinton.
B: Please don't make me shocked / That really surprises me a great deal.

- Did I use the right two clauses here "Please........shocked" and "That.........deal"?

Thanks a lot!

NamLan

 

[nzfauna]

The first is entirely unnatural.

The second is correct. However it would be more normal to say something like:

"Really!?"