The highest figure for clothing/footwear belonged to Italy

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    Senior Member
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    I don't like either, and would use one of these:

    The highest figure for clothing/footwear was Italy's 9%.
    Italy had the highest figure for clothing/footwear, at 9%.
    The highest figure for clothing/footwear was for Italy, at 9%.
     

    kira_moondance

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    Thank you so much for your suggestions. Can I write "The highest figure for clothing/footwear was that of Italy, at 9%"?
     
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