The improvement of soil fumigation- which phrase sounds better?

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sergtab

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Russian, Russia
Please tell me, which phrase sounds better? 1.The improvement of soil fumigation preplant treatment in the strawberry plantations of Non Chernozyom Zone of Russia 2.The improvement of soil fumigation preplant treatment in the strawberry plantations of Non Chernozyom Zone in Russia
 
  • vachecow

    Senior Member
    USA English
    The only difference that I could see was the of/in, and I think they both work. I might go with the second one, just to avoid the repetition of "of" in the sentence.
     
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