There is a problem for non-native speakers like me. We just rely on Chinese definition too much, and can't feel the nuance.
For example, there is a sentence: The number of TV audience rises rapidly between 8pm and 10pm.
Someone provides another version: The number of TV audience increases quickly between 8 o'clock and 10 o'clock at night.
I feel "increases quickly" is not as good as "rises rapidly". But I can't give the exact reason.
The context is, the sentence will be used in a IELTS writing task.
I hope this post is not considered one which ask you to do a proofreading.
For example, there is a sentence: The number of TV audience rises rapidly between 8pm and 10pm.
Someone provides another version: The number of TV audience increases quickly between 8 o'clock and 10 o'clock at night.
I feel "increases quickly" is not as good as "rises rapidly". But I can't give the exact reason.
The context is, the sentence will be used in a IELTS writing task.
I hope this post is not considered one which ask you to do a proofreading.