the ostrich feathers, vaporous, quiver

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translation lover

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Arabic
Hi, I am working on a file for Paul Ka, the clothing brand, can someone explain the part in bold to make a bit clearer, maybe add a verb or something like that?

The temperature drops, the perfume of bougainvillea rises in the garden, a woman appears. Her shoulder is bare, her figure defined, the dress is black. A breeze lifts across the ocean, the ostrich feathers, vaporous, quiver…Palm Beach awaits.

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  • PaulQ

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    UK
    English - England
    A breeze lifts across the ocean, the ostrich feathers, vaporous, that are as soft and tasteful as a light and delicate vapor, quiver in the slight breeze that I just mentionedher thoughts turn to Palm Beach, Ah yes, Palm Beach, which is much warmer and congeneal but equally romantic and sophisticated, awaits.

    (at this point she stops rubbing lard into the cat's boil and gets out her credit card to orders vast quantities of expensive clothing via her iPhone and she lives the dream...)
     
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