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volver

Senior Member
french belgium
Hello,



A: What is the procedure?
B : I first need to get the serial number and fault description of the unit.
therefore I will give you all the required information to send the unit back for repair.
Is my highlighted sentence well worded?


Thank you.

VOLVER
 
  • Thomas Tompion

    Senior Member
    English - England
    I think, Volver, you mean:

    I first need to get the serial number and fault description of the unit; once I have that, I will give you all the further information required to send the unit back for repair.

    I may be wrong about that, but I couldn't see the logical link which your therefore was making.

    I'd be happy about the part of your sentence in bold.
     
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