the search-mileage-stint

Dr.Appalayya

Senior Member
India;Telugu
Please help me correct the following three sentences:

1.HR function covers activities beginning with the search for suitable candidates to training them to taking care of their stint till they leave.
2.HR function tries to draw some mileage or create value even at the point of employees leaving the organization.
3.Employees on exit route can be either best brand ambassadors of the company or its badmouthers.

Why should there be 'the' before search?
Is it wrong if training of them is written in the place of training them?
 
  • difficult cuss

    Senior Member
    English England
    1 HR function covers activities beginning with the search for suitable candidates THROUGH training them to taking care of their stint until they leave (till/until is a personal preference only)
    2 HR function tries to draw some mileage or create value even at the point WHEN employees leavE the organization (it just reads clearer)
    3 This seems OK, (although it is "management speak" which I find clumsy)

    The...is required before search. GRAMMAR PEOPLE?
    "to training them" if you want to write "of" it would have to be "to THE training OF them but that is just too clumsy
     
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