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Ocham

Senior Member
Japanese
I wrote the sentence below. I wonder whether the bold part does not
go well with the other part of the sentence or not. Does it sound odd
in the sentence?

After going through the 16th-century gate the Porte de l’Avancee,
you will find the Grande Rue or main street with its souvenir shops,
restaurants and hotels. The street leads up to the abbey entrance,
attracting numerous visitors during the tourist season.
 
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