Hi all,
the original sentence reads:
He felt guilty and was convicted to change.
I see where the word choice comes from as Merriam-Webster also defines it as "to convince of error or sinfulness", but I find it a little clumsy and heavy-handed, as googling finds its usage in the frequent company of religious exhortations.
Not to mention the infraction that caused the guilt in the first place is of no consequence, i.e. scolding someone out of turn. I would make the change to the simpler "convince".
Thoughts?
the original sentence reads:
He felt guilty and was convicted to change.
I see where the word choice comes from as Merriam-Webster also defines it as "to convince of error or sinfulness", but I find it a little clumsy and heavy-handed, as googling finds its usage in the frequent company of religious exhortations.
Not to mention the infraction that caused the guilt in the first place is of no consequence, i.e. scolding someone out of turn. I would make the change to the simpler "convince".
Thoughts?