Hello everyone!
I am translating a wedding speech and I am not sure if this text passage sounds correct.
I would love for a native speaker (preferably BE) to read it and let me know if it is correct.
Thank you in advance
You both love spending time and playing with your daughters, as well as going for ice cream or taking strolls together. Just as much as you like relaxing on the sofa or playing video games together! Even though, they also enjoy doing the latter by themselves (or on their own??). (The speaker alternates between addressing the bridal couple and the audience, which is why I used "they" in the last sentence instead of "you".)
I am translating a wedding speech and I am not sure if this text passage sounds correct.
I would love for a native speaker (preferably BE) to read it and let me know if it is correct.
Thank you in advance
You both love spending time and playing with your daughters, as well as going for ice cream or taking strolls together. Just as much as you like relaxing on the sofa or playing video games together! Even though, they also enjoy doing the latter by themselves (or on their own??). (The speaker alternates between addressing the bridal couple and the audience, which is why I used "they" in the last sentence instead of "you".)