They both thought that a sudden feeling had united them

[Cereth]

This is a very beautiful poem written by polish poet Wislawa Szymborska
It is called: "Love at first sight"

I already translate it into spanish but I can´t translate it into japanese, is here a good and "hima" soul who can help me in this translation? or maybe if you know a site in japanese where I can find the poem translated.
Note: This is not homework.
They both thought
that a sudden feeling had united them
This certainty is beautiful,
Even more beautiful than uncertainty.

xxxxxx

Poem is larger but I don´t want to abuse of you, with those lines is enough for me, All of your help is well received and thanked.
Gaby.

 

[kamome]

...only a poorest essay, but...:


突然感情に
関係を持たせれたと
どちらも思った・・・。
美しくてが、
躊躇のよりも
美しいのだ。


"totsuzen no kanjyou ni
kankei o motasareta to
dochira mo omotta...
utsukushikute,
cyuucyou no yori mo
utsukushii no da"


かもめ。

 

[Hiro Sasaki]

突然の感情が　ふたりを結ぶつけたのだと思った。

この確信は　すばらしい。

不確信より　すばらしい。

Hiro Sasaki

 

[Hiro Sasaki]

...only a poorest essay, but...:

Buen Giorno Kameme san.

突然感情に
関係を持たせれたと 突然の感情が関係をもたせたと

　突然の感情に（より）　関係を持たされたと

I only corrected the sentence grammatically. Both are pratically not
good. 関係を持つ　implies carnal relations.

躊躇（　ちゅうちょ）　is hesitation between two options to take.
and does not mean "uncertainty " in the cotext.

Hiro Sasaki



どちらも思った・・・。
美しくてが、
躊躇のよりも
美しいのだ。




かもめ。

 

[kamome]

始めまして、ひろ様。　
お世話に成りました。　非常に訂正をどうも有り難うございます。
ご免なさい、日本語の野暮生徒だけです・・・。　
それから、どうぞ今度にローマジテクストも書いて下さい。

...as you can easily understand, many NUANCES are
hard to catch and/or interpretate for a poor student:
I'm passionate with japan poetry, so that I tried to
make out a TANKA or WAKA of it, but the syllable and
rythm limits obviously suggested me to just try a simple
translation...which I also was wrong in doing, ざんえん！
...I would be very pleased to have your opinion also
about other things I have been writing along years, so
please allow me to invite you to:

xxx -- kamome's homepage; URL deleted (Flam).

be and feel the welcome - 宜しく。

かもめ。

 

[Hiro Sasaki]

You are welcome, Kamome san.

始めまして、ひろ様。　
お世話に成りました。　非常に訂正をどうも有り難うございます。
　訂正していただいて　たいへん　ありがとうございます。

日本語の野暮生徒だけです。　 　I don't think that you are a Yabo.
私は　日本語を勉強している　野暮な　イタリア人にすぎません。　

xxx

be and feel the welcome - 宜しく。

かもめ。

I must go out today.

Hiro Sasaki

 

[Cereth]

Thank you so much Kamome san and Sasaki san for your attempt...though those lines can´t complete the whole idea of the poem...so sad Flam had to delate the rest of it...If somebody knows where can I find this poem translated into japanese will make so happy.
Gracias

 

[Frenko]

...so sad Flam had to delate the rest of it...

Here you can find the rest of the poetry in English