to weep or not to weep

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Hello everybody,

To weep, or not to weep, that is not a question.

Context : my own writing
(My Mum once told me 'you never cried exept when you stomach was empty')

What was your first impression on the above sentence? (You can ignore the context)

Thank you in advance
 
  • JustKate

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    My first impressions: "Somebody is trying really hard to be clever" and "Why is there no question about weeping? Since when is weeping or not weeping a certain thing?"

    Whether you actually are clever and not just trying to be ;) , would depend very much on whether you answer that question about weeping in the very next sentence.
     
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