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namlan

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- You shouldn't swim so far from shore when the sea is choppy.
- I think "..........swim too far from shore when the sea is rough" is better, right?

Thanks a lot!

NamLan
 
  • Dimcl

    Senior Member
    Canadian English
    - You shouldn't swim so far from shore when the sea is choppy.
    - I think "..........swim too far from shore when the sea is rough" is better, right?

    Thanks a lot!

    NamLan
    Namlan, you are quite correct in many of these alternatives you suggest but you neglect to tell us why you think your alternative is better than the original. As Nzfauna says, either of these is correct and your alternative is no better than the original (without context).
     
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