Up on the bulletin board, the teacher put up

swayingrass

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Up on the bulletin board, the teacher had put up all the children's artwork so everyone could see them.
Upon the bulletin board, the teacher had put all ...


Hi,

Do both of the above sound right and mean about the same to you? Thanks.
 
  • mtmjr

    Senior Member
    English (US)
    Neither one sounds all that pleasing. I would suggest:

    "The teacher put up all the childrens' artwork on the bulletin board so that everyone could see them."

    I'm pretty sure it should be childrens' instead of children's.
     
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