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citeaux

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Malaysia Malay
Hi Experts,

Could someone help me with me texts below ..

"We place vigorously pursuing certification and continuing education so that we can be the first to master new technologies in IBM Lotus Domino/Notes product."

. is it correct ?
. could you make it sounds impressive for our customers


thank you
 
  • WongFeiHung

    Senior Member
    USA English
    "We are always vigorously pursuing certification and furthering our education so that we can be the first ..."
     

    pachomius

    Senior Member
    USA / American English
    Also - you could either drop 'product':
    'first to master new technologies in IBM Lotus Domino/Notes'
    or, put 'the' before 'IBM':
    'first to master new technologies in the IBM Lotus Domino/Notes product.'
     
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