Voulant alors à ma manière lui rendre hommage

Cleare

Senior Member
IDF
Russian
Hi,

I'm a bit confused with the word order in the phrase. Could you help me? The context is about the angel. The text:

Voulant alors à ma manière lui rendre hommage pour sa présence, je décidais ...

My attempt:
So, wanting my way to pay homage to him for his existing, I decided ...

Thanks in advance for your help and comments!
 
  • Sush

    Member
    Canada - English
    Voulant alors à ma manière lui rendre hommage pour sa présence, je décidais ...

    My attempt:
    So, wanting my way to pay homage to him for his existing, I decided ...
    Hi Cleare,

    I'd suggest a few changes: So, wanting in my way to pay homage to him for his presence...

    "Pay homage" isn't a common expression at all, but it makes sense and maybe it fits the context, so I left it.
     

    Cleare

    Senior Member
    IDF
    Russian
    Hi Cleare,

    I'd suggest a few changes: So, wanting in my way to pay homage to him for his presence...

    "Pay homage" isn't a common expression at all, but it makes sense and maybe it fits the context, so I left it.
    Thank you, Sush!:)
    Is "pay tribute" more common?
     
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