want to be a diplomat since they were born?

indra16

New Member
Mongolia
Is it correct to say " not one of the MANY students who WILL tell you" ? It sounds awkward to me, but I don't know for sure. Please offer corrections to my sentence if you see mistakes. Thank you

I am not one of the many students who will tell you that they have wanted to be a diplomat since they were born.
 
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  • timpeac

    Senior Member
    English (England)
    Please suggest corrections if there are mistakes. Thanl you

    I am not one of the many students who will tell you that they have wanted to be a diplomat since they were born.
    Hi indra and welcome!:) I'm afraid that we don't allow pure corrections of texts - we require specific questions. Can you please tell us which area you are uncertain of?
     
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