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We can join one of the school clubs — karate, sambo or judo.

Discussion in 'English Only' started by Ragneda, Jan 20, 2019.

  1. Ragneda

    Ragneda Senior Member

    Russian
    I wonder if this sentence is correct?

    We can join one of the school clubs — karate, sambo or judo.

    Thanks in advance!
     
  2. Florentia52

    Florentia52 Modwoman in the attic

    Wisconsin
    English - United States
    We can't proofread entire sentences here, Ragneda, but we'll be happy to help you with a word or phrase you think might be a problem. Also, please tell us the situation in which you would use this sentence.
     
  3. Ragneda

    Ragneda Senior Member

    Russian

    Although we have PE lessons twice a week, we can join one of the school clubs — karate, sambo or judo.

    Can I write the sports like that?
     
  4. Florentia52

    Florentia52 Modwoman in the attic

    Wisconsin
    English - United States
    And which word or phrase in your sentence do you think might be a problem?
     
  5. Ragneda

    Ragneda Senior Member

    Russian
    Can I enumerate the sports like that?
     
  6. Loob

    Loob Senior Member

    English UK
    Yes, it's fine:thumbsup:

    (I had to look up sambo - I hadn't come across it before. But there it is in Wikipedia: Sambo (martial art) :D)
     
  7. Florentia52

    Florentia52 Modwoman in the attic

    Wisconsin
    English - United States
    Yes, that's fine, as long as they are all clubs.
     
  8. Ragneda

    Ragneda Senior Member

    Russian
    Thank you))

    Thank you )
     

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