What dedication!

[rafaelgan]

Is it correct in this context?

What dedication! He depends for excellences more impressive.

Or should be What a dedication!

 

[la reine victoria]

Is it correct in this context?

What dedication! He depends for excellences more impressive.

Or should be What a dedication!

"What dedication!" is correct. Sorry, I don't understand the rest of your sentence.

Should it be "He strives for more impressive excellence"?

LRV