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[origiomon]

I was booking a hotel using someone else's credit card. On the website it says "When making your reservation please note the cardholder’s name and confirm that you have permission to use their card in the "Special Requests" box."
So I wrote "I book the hotel using someone else's credit card whose cardholder is XXXX with authorization."
Is there any problem with this sentence? I want to make it sounds more formal.

 

[JamesM]

Hello, origiomon, and welcome to the forum.

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