when they found some primitive weapons

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jesusguime

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The three young people were exploring a deserted island when they found some primitive weapons.
When the three young people were exploring a deserted island, they found some primitive weapons.


Hi, nice guys.

Do both of the above sound right and mean about the same to you? Thanks.
 
  • envie de voyager

    Senior Member
    english-canadian
    The first sentence is perfect. The second sentence is fine grammatically, but it does not sound natural. I would change it like this:

    While the three young people were exploring a deserted island, they found some primitive weapons.

    or

    When the three young people explored a deserted island, they found some primitive weapons.
     
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