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tigerduck

Senior Member
German / Switzerland
Hi

Which of the following constructions is more informal?

1) Here are some proposals of events and activities in which you can take part.
2) Here are some are some proposals of events and activities you can take part in.

Thanks.
 
  • Lexiphile

    Senior Member
    England English
    more informal?
    Well, sentence (2) [ignoring the duplication] is certainly less formal than (1), so I guess it must be more informal as well. :)
     
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