which is more informal

[tigerduck]

Hi

Which of the following constructions is more informal?

1) Here are some proposals of events and activities in which you can take part.
2) Here are some are some proposals of events and activities you can take part in.

Thanks.

 

[Lexiphile]

more informal?
Well, sentence (2) [ignoring the duplication] is certainly less formal than (1), so I guess it must be more informal as well.

 

[tigerduck]

Thank you Lexiphile and also thank you for pointing out the duplication .