Dear all,Walk the beaches of the Catlins and you’ll find paua shells and wildlife. The rare Hooker’s Sea Lion lives here, while offshore the equally rare Hector’s Dolphin cavorts in the waves.---taken from a New Zealand English speaker
To my mind, the bolded part should be while the equally rare offshore Hector's Dolphin. As you see, I changed the order of words, which makes sense to me. Am I right? Thanks.