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Discussion in 'English Only' started by alexeru653280, Dec 23, 2016.

  1. alexeru653280 Senior Member

    Iran
    Hi,

    Are the following sentences correct grammatically and conceptually? If it is not , kindly suggest ways to make it clearer. "who developed entropy generation minimization technique" is referred to Bejan.

    This conclusion contradicts the findings of Bejan [34] at deep stall condition who developed entropy generation minimization technique.
     
  2. Florentia52

    Florentia52 Modwoman in the attic

    Wisconsin
    English - United States
    Which word or phrase are you asking about, amin12?
     
  3. alexeru653280 Senior Member

    Iran
    I want to know that whether "who developed entropy generation minimization technique" is referred or not in this sentence.

    I added a "an" before "entropy generation minimization technique".
     
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