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alexeru653280

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Iran
Hi,

Are the following sentences correct grammatically and conceptually? If it is not , kindly suggest ways to make it clearer. "who developed entropy generation minimization technique" is referred to Bejan.

This conclusion contradicts the findings of Bejan [34] at deep stall condition who developed entropy generation minimization technique.
 
  • alexeru653280

    Senior Member
    Iran
    Which word or phrase are you asking about, amin12?
    I want to know that whether "who developed entropy generation minimization technique" is referred or not in this sentence.

    I added a "an" before "entropy generation minimization technique".
     
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